She asked for just a trim. What she got shattered more than a mirror. A razor sharp descent into obsession, identity, and the violence hiding beneath perfection.
That took the unexpected turn that I think we all feel when getting our hair done. I usually just try not to cry or be mean when I know it can only get worse the more they try to fix it but she went all out! Awesome!
The cape being laid over her like a tiny salon courtesy..? I came in worried about hair length and somehow ended up side-eyeing a cape for being more polite than the murder.
I can identify with Rosie! At age 80 I have not let anyone but myself cut my hair but three times since I was 20. They will never listen when I say. β No layers.β The last time my cousinβs wife looked at me 3 days later and said, β Do not let anyone touch your hair again!β I wonβt. I do not want to become a Rosie
The last straw, huh? π
Lol! π Others told reporters: βShe seemes totally calm when she walked inβ¦β π
They always seem calm right before they go ballistic.
At least she is able to (in some form) articulate her frustration. π
Fix it... Me eyeballing at what happened next. So explosive, so thrilling, I... love it. <33
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wow - I've been there, have I ever! My poor mother. I threw a brush, lol
Ouh no! π³π Sorry for you and your mother! π At least it was only the brushβ¦ ππ
Aaaand that's why I haven't been at a hairdresser for years π Loved the read
Thanks a lot, Nick! πππ»
That took the unexpected turn that I think we all feel when getting our hair done. I usually just try not to cry or be mean when I know it can only get worse the more they try to fix it but she went all out! Awesome!
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Screaming Time !!!!!
It sure is! π Thank you!! ππ»ππ»
The cape being laid over her like a tiny salon courtesy..? I came in worried about hair length and somehow ended up side-eyeing a cape for being more polite than the murder.
Lol! π Poor capes! π Thank you very much for reading! πππ»
Very refreshing! I like your attention to detail, build up of tension, and the assault!
Well done! Kudosπ
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I can identify with Rosie! At age 80 I have not let anyone but myself cut my hair but three times since I was 20. They will never listen when I say. β No layers.β The last time my cousinβs wife looked at me 3 days later and said, β Do not let anyone touch your hair again!β I wonβt. I do not want to become a Rosie
Lol! π I can imagine and Iβm glad you donβt let anyone near your hair! π Thank you so much for reading! πππ»
lol
Dark
Brilliant
You might like my dark little story inspired by a dream:
https://marycontrary1162.substack.com/p/she-used-to-be-mine
Thank you very much! I indeed liked your piece very much! πππ»π€
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