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Alicia's avatar

The last straw, huh? πŸ˜‚

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Lol! πŸ˜‚ Others told reporters: β€žShe seemes totally calm when she walked inβ€¦β€œ πŸ˜‰

Alicia's avatar

They always seem calm right before they go ballistic.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

At least she is able to (in some form) articulate her frustration. πŸ˜‰

Hai Dang's avatar

Fix it... Me eyeballing at what happened next. So explosive, so thrilling, I... love it. <33

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πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Thank you so much!! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ»πŸ–€

Jane Wanders Reflections's avatar

wow - I've been there, have I ever! My poor mother. I threw a brush, lol

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Ouh no! πŸ˜³πŸ˜‚ Sorry for you and your mother! πŸ˜‰ At least it was only the brush… πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜‰

Nick J Berg's avatar

Aaaand that's why I haven't been at a hairdresser for years πŸ˜… Loved the read

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Thanks a lot, Nick! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ»

Stuck In The Middle's avatar

That took the unexpected turn that I think we all feel when getting our hair done. I usually just try not to cry or be mean when I know it can only get worse the more they try to fix it but she went all out! Awesome!

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Thank you so much, your feedback and you reading my work means a lot to me! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ»πŸ₯³πŸ–€

John Strain's avatar

Its

Screaming Time !!!!!

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

It sure is! πŸ˜‚ Thank you!! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The cape being laid over her like a tiny salon courtesy..? I came in worried about hair length and somehow ended up side-eyeing a cape for being more polite than the murder.

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Lol! πŸ˜‚ Poor capes! πŸ˜‰ Thank you very much for reading! πŸ™‚πŸ™πŸ»

Robyn Marcus's avatar

Very refreshing! I like your attention to detail, build up of tension, and the assault!

Well done! KudosπŸ‘

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Thank you so much for the feedback! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ» Appreciate you! πŸ™‚

Vicki Parker's avatar

I can identify with Rosie! At age 80 I have not let anyone but myself cut my hair but three times since I was 20. They will never listen when I say. β€œ No layers.” The last time my cousin’s wife looked at me 3 days later and said, β€œ Do not let anyone touch your hair again!” I won’t. I do not want to become a Rosie

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Lol! πŸ˜‚ I can imagine and Iβ€˜m glad you donβ€˜t let anyone near your hair! πŸ™‚ Thank you so much for reading! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ»

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lol

Mary Contrary's avatar

Dark

Brilliant

You might like my dark little story inspired by a dream:

https://marycontrary1162.substack.com/p/she-used-to-be-mine

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Thank you very much! I indeed liked your piece very much! πŸ˜πŸ™πŸ»πŸ–€

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What do you think? Good or bad? πŸ™‚