The schedule said Breakfast. Walk. Rest. The soup was good. The smiles had no reason. Maya noticed herself changing, and kept noticing, until one morning she didn’t.
That tiny act of witnessing herself feels like her last thread back to who she is. And then that ending—“She was learning. That was the part that frightened her.” Chilling. The horror isn’t that they’re forcing her. It’s that eventually they may not have to.
Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback and support! 😁🙏🏻🖤 Yeah, I think that is one of my fears… to be controlled or to let me be controlled! 😱😉
Quite the creepy commentary on social submission.
Thanks indeed my friend! 😁🖤🙏🏻
What Bradley said. I'll just take the words out of his mouth. I'm hooked too. <3
Thank you so much, Petra! 😁🙏🏻 Really happy you liked it as well! 🖤
Maya smiling back at Gerald scared me more than the fence did. That pen better survive.
Thanks lot for reading! 😁🙏🏻 Yeah, believe me, I hope so too! 😉
Nightmares of control.
Very much so! 🖤
That tiny act of witnessing herself feels like her last thread back to who she is. And then that ending—“She was learning. That was the part that frightened her.” Chilling. The horror isn’t that they’re forcing her. It’s that eventually they may not have to.
Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback and support! 😁🙏🏻🖤 Yeah, I think that is one of my fears… to be controlled or to let me be controlled! 😱😉
we adjust, adapt,
with familiarity,
comes acceptance.
are we pawns?
or are we master...
Thank you, Roger! 😁🙏🏻 That hits the nail on the head I think! 🖤🖤
Godddd why did this read so familiar to me. Like I’ve been there before. Great writing, it personally gave me chills. ✨✨✨ … “I’m a good way…” :)
Thank you so much, Emmett! 😁🙏🏻 Appreciate your feedback! 🖤
I’m hooked on this story. It’s just the kind of psychological suspense that makes my brain happy 😊
Thanks for saying that! 😁🙏🏻 Maybe I will continue with that story someday! 🙂
Nooooo stop the brainwashing.
Hahaha! 😂 If only it could be stopped! 😈😉
I feel like I’m in a clockwork orange now
Ooh haven‘t thought of that! 😳 Thanks for reading! 😁🙏🏻🖤
I’m interested.
To go to that place or…? 😈
Yes! We all learn eventually. 😵💫
I surely do not! 😉